|Reviews for Wars No One Wins|
| Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Favorite lines: "Not even pretending to / Be perfect though that / Assumption wears him like / A favorite jacket"
"Starry nights and raindrops / Don’t remind him of anyone / In particular / Because there have just been / So many..."
"I may have lost the battle / But no one wins this war"
| SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Love it, you have the best ending lines.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This is excellent (of course). I love the imagery.
| recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
love the last lines. a lot of pretty imagery here. nice work :)
| Frosted Midnight chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
this is very good, in a sad way. I especially liked the last line. i may have lost the battle, but no one wins the war.
it ends the poem so completely
| Coeur Sans Espoir chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
I enjoyed this poem. It flowed really well, in my opinion, and I have met people like this during my life so I can relate really well. I hope you continue writing poems that are as good as this. Thank you for the review as well.
| EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
wow. This is great. One of you're best! I love it, really, good job. I really love the second and third stanzas. "Drowning in not quite lies One night goodbyes" Amazing. Especially the metaphors in the second stanza, genius. One of your best! Keep writing!
| she smolders chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I was going to quote a line that was my favourite, but then I would be quoting the entire poem. Your descriptive language is beautiful. This story just about breaks my heart and I don't think anyone really wins a war. Take care.
| The Cowardly Lion chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I like this. Keep writing!