|Reviews for Kiss Me, Kate|
| Originally Pristine chapter 5 . 3/23/2016
I kept reading when I shouldn't've. Honestly?
Everything in this story is pathetic and disgusting.
1) Mason is a fucking indecisive asshole that doesn't know what the hell he wants, and treats Kate like a little female dog. What. Is he in middle school? I swear he's twelve.
2) Kate is submissive, brainless, and a huge-ass pushover. Did I mention she's brainless? I'm talking like BELLA SWAN BRAINLESS.
3) Stephen and what's-her-face, Rachel (sorry, she's such a side character, I forgot her name), are pathetic serial cheaters with NO sense of shame. Oh yeah, and Kate forgave her ass of an ex for being a serial cheater. [Cough] Pushover. [Cough]
4) Giovanni keeps trying to guilt-trip Kate. Bugger off, Giovanni. She was in the right to be upset by Mason—CHRIST.
5) Kate and Mason's make up in the last chapter was deeply unsatisfying and very unrealistic. They even brought up the fact they fight WAY too much, and they still get together anyway.
You know what would be hilarious and the ultimate irony? If Kate and Mason ended up cheating on each other the moment they split for college.
This story's only saving grace was Kate's side-character friends who were loyal to the end.
NO WOMAN should ever let herself be treated this way EVER. To all girls (and guys, I guess) reading this story and my review: if you EVER meet a boy like Mason and Stephen and Giovanni, RUN THE OTHER WAY. And for the love of god, people, have a sense of dignity—god damn it!
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| Cornerofoysters chapter 5 . 7/13/2015
Hey, I don't know if you'll get this since you wrote this a long time ago but I've just found it and I just knew I had to review. Don't get me wrong, your writing is really great but I am absolutely outraged with this story. I mean, Mason sucks and he sucks BIG TIME!
For once, he just gets her out of her class and stalks off like she's supposed to follow him. What is she, his bitch? And she does like the submissive she is. And then he said nothing, gets in the car and snap at her for not getting in. I mean, what the hell!
But if only he stopped there. But no, he proceed to ignore her... for five weeks. And then he steals her cigarette from her mouth, take a drag like it's no big deal, almost kisses her... Then he takes her to Starbucks, flirt with a girl in front of her, gets defensive when she calls him on it and offends her.
But he apologizes and they have a nice conversation of sorts just for him to ignore her again for an entire month.
Right now I have to stop. Seriously, what's wrong with this guy? I can't even call him jerk or asshole. He's just crappy; crappy and shitty.
But he just doesn't stop his shittyness, really. He goes on a date the day of the prom. And when he arrives, he keeps ignoring her! And then he grabs her (because he doesn't ask, does he? Never mind what she wants) and leads them to the dance floor where they dance. And Kate, in her first moment of sanity, says they need to talk. They fight and he accuses her (albeit she doesn't know it's her... How cold she?) of being dense for not realizing he likes her. He's so stupid, by this point I'm thinking she's the one insane and deserves what she's getting.
But now, that was the breaking point where I thought I wouldn't... couldn't keep reading. I'd just have to throw my phone into the wall. His jackass of a friend has the nerve to blame it all on her as if his shitty friend had make it obvious he was infatuated with her and she was deliberately smashing Mason's heart into little pieces.
However, what ticked me off more was she ran after him, buying the idea he was perfect and she was wrong all the time.
And she keeps doing that in the last chapter.
So point is, the whole story infuriated me. Kate's passive behavior and submissive demeanor; Mason's shitty personality; Giovanni's input.
Nevertheless, it's a good writing and I can't complain of indifference towards the story. Albeit I most wanted to strangle your characters the whole time.
| Kalilah chapter 4 . 2/25/2015
Um what the hell? No, Giovanni. Mason's feelings weren't very clear at all. Who the hell flirts and goes out with another girl if you're interested in someone else? Sure he opened up to her one time and listened to her another, but he also ignored her for weeks on end after each time too. I wasn't even aware that other girls were hounding him to dance with them. Nor did I think she was watching him watch her while she danced. Sure someone else mentioned that he had been watching her whilst she danced but I wouldn't know how reliable that was especially since he ignored her before that when he arrived.
Sorry I was okay with how the story was progressing but when Giovanni blamed her for everything, I got ticked off.
| whut chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
I have absolute ly no idea why she is getting all the blame. No girl in her right mind would enjoy mixed signals from a guy because lets face it, all it gives you is false hope. And excuse me for not thinking he was interested in her, I didnt know interested men had to show how interested they are by dating other people as usually that is an indication that you are NOT interested. No matter what his excuse is, if he is trying to win her over by playing the I am the victim card cause I have been stalking you without you noticing and you should really be ms. Nancy drew and get that I like you without me actually saying that to you cause you're supposed to be all detective and shit then WHAT A DOUCHE. He fits well with bridget, the poor girl who gets dropped like a hot potato the moment the girl he actually likes does something about his feelings and chase after him. Jerk.
| person chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I love this it was so amazing but i must admit i feel a conection with kate because in ways im very similar to her but i believe you are truly a amazing talented writer! P.S. I loved how you roughly started it with 'kiss me Kate' and then pretty much finished it with 'kiss me Kate' genius!
| silentvoiceshout chapter 5 . 12/8/2013
3 it! it was such a cute story though I did want to hit Mason on the head couple of times instead of Stephan...if it's fluff u give us then fluff it is we wholeheartedly accept (it) ;)
| Bee chapter 5 . 9/4/2013
I absolutely love it!
| my princess ending chapter 5 . 8/25/2013
There was so much fluff. I freaking loved it, okay? I have so much to say about this just because I love the story line and everything was so cutesy and slow but fast paced at the same time.
Kate. Kate is my dream self, in a way. Like, she's the kind of person I want to be. Her personality is perfect and on point. She sounds like she's beautiful. The thing I'm most jealous of is the fact that she's mature enough to handle a long distance relationship, which I can't and won't ever be able to do. Kate reminds me of myself, the whole giving up easily but at the same time hoping that he'll come running after me. I admit that I hate that about myself but that problem seems to fit her so well in this situation and I understand her reason behind it whereas I just won't run after someone that's willing to run away from me. I'm rambling. You probably don't even understand what I'm saying, lol.
Mason is my dream guy. I kind of have a thing for guys that smoke but aren't addicted to it. I found it extremely hot when I found out Mason smoked. He has that "I did a good thing but I'm not gonna say anything about it" personality that I freaking love. Basically, I really like it when people don't talk about the good things they've done because to be honest, I'm quick to judge. He's extremely considerate and doesn't mind the fact that he's totally whipped.
This story was all I needed. It wasn't overflowing with cliche but it had enough to make me all giddy. I needed the fluff so badly. I noticed in one of your other stories in the a/n that you said Kiss Me, Kate was nominated for a SKoW award and let me just say it totally deserved it. I'm not sure what category it was nominated in but I'm sure it was perfect for it. I don't know if you won or not, which by the way I'm hoping you did but I...don't know what to say. I'm so jumpy by the fact that they ended up together.
Your writing is as flawless as ever. I love the way that you had the story go at a specific pace which wasn't too fast but at the same time it wasn't too slow. The way you clued us in on the fact that Kate fell in love with Mason but at the same time you didn't bluntly say it. What I loved most was the confession on the bridge. I am in love with the way that people that love each other can sit together and not talk but the silence won't be awkward. The confession was absolutely flawless. The whole "Kiss me, Kate" command had me on my knees. The emotion was so real and I got all tingly. To be honest, I would never have the balls to say that so props to Mason for getting that out there. They kind of have the perfect relationship. And last, thank you for finally writing some fluff.
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P.S. you have to write an epilogue!
| my princess ending chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
There is something wrong with fp mobile and it's pissing me off since I can't continue reading.
I absolutely love Kiss Me, Kate. It doesn't piss me off because the pairing and character personalities are on point. I wouldn't say it moves too fast because I can understand and relate to the whole falling in love too fast problem. Eh. I'm not sure what to say because chapter four isn't loading and I'm getting really annoyed because I would love to read right now.
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| my princess ending chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
OH MY GOD FLUFF. THERE'S GONNA BE FLUFF. But why is it only a five chapter story? That's really short, y'know?
So, I think I'm starting to get sick so I just needed something cutesy and fluffy to make me feel better. I believe I will enjoy this story.
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| Taylor chapter 5 . 8/18/2013
Okay. A few things:
1) HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK. That's adorable. Too bad you didn't finish Rachel and Stephen's relationship with misfortune. Oh well, I'm really happy about Kate and Mason.
2) This is funny because I have a friend named Collin who goes to Notre Dame and I know a girl named Kate who goes to Duke, haha. I know it's just coincidental, but it's pretty amusing.
3) Okay. I didn't actually need to make a third bullet, but I'll praise you for your awesomeness. :)
| A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 5 . 8/14/2013
Awww lovely, They found their happiness after all. So... how about a 4 years later fic? Since she and Stephen lasted 4 years? Just an idea :P Good luck with SKOW!
| poopforbrains chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
I'm a little confused. Why is everyone yelling at Kate? From being ditched, ignored and dating another girl, I'm sorry, but the way I see it, Kate should be the one pissed off, Mason has no right.
As much as I love the story, I absolutely hate how Kate always goes after Mason. First, she just followed him when he took her out of class. Second, she had to wait for his time when it was she who needed to talk. And lastly, she's the one looking for him when it's Mason's fault they were arguing in the first place?
I really love your story, but the points I've just made are really pissing me off. Not to mention the fact that Mason's excuse of 'giving her space' really wasn't good enough. Couldn't he have talked to her about it instead of ignoring her out of the blue?
Sorry, I rant a lot when something pisses me off. Anyway, on with the story. :)
| Brielle Gemson chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
This is so so so cute and I love it and yay(: