Reviews for In Your Dreams
CheckerboardBunny chapter 16 . 2/15/2018
Omg this story was amazing! I’m really surprised it doesn’t have more reviews! Well, it’s their loss!
Guest chapter 11 . 12/14/2016
I'm sorry but pardon my language but Sophie is a dumbass
BlueAki chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
Man, I feel so bad for hope.
invizygirl chapter 14 . 7/21/2008

excellent chapter. great emotion.

i luv paramore! _
invizygirl chapter 13 . 7/1/2008
aw i luv connor! excellent chapter. update soon. _
invizygirl chapter 12 . 6/25/2008
wow. excellent writing. great emotion. more soon please.
invizygirl chapter 9 . 5/5/2008
christian is too good to be true! lol. that was adorable. update soon.
invizygirl chapter 8 . 2/28/2008
oo caught! lol. they're cute. i like it. update soon
invizygirl chapter 7 . 2/24/2008
yay christian! cute. oo he's not gonna be real happy about wes huh? no... lol. update soon
Amber chapter 3 . 2/16/2008
Connor adds a bit of sex appeal to the story. (well, i think he's sexy even though i don't like emos) The fact that Sophie chooses Hope's boyfriends serves as another example of how she runs Hope's life, thought you didn't have to re-introduce Wes as Hope's ex in the second part of the chapter. The fact that Connor and Sophie despise each other is quite hilarious, and you remembered to include the effects of loud, obnoxious arguments on surroundings. Sophie's nickname for Hope's father also reminds the reader of how degrading she can be. The car ride from hell slighlty interprets the shallowness of Sophie, as is her catwalk. Another nice closing to the chapter.
Amber chapter 2 . 2/15/2008
the tone fits well with what Hope is feeling- a blend of somber expectance of what she has endured for years and the feeling that no one comprehends what she's feeling, or that they even notice her state of mind. you threw in a few obstacles to keep the reader engaged- good. i really like how you incorporate physical reactions to her emotions- excellent. i like how you threw in a little dillusion with the ring and the evil glint. the closing for the chapter sealed it off well. it still has a tad of the meg ryan feel, but now it's more you- perfect.
Amber chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
analysis of preface:

i remember this story. i like the pessimistic feel. you started with a common topic and elaborated- good. i love first person- lets the reader get in the character's head better than third person and whatnot. you have your style, (here comes the constructive critisicm) but it somewhat reminds me of meg ryan. i get this feel about the second paragraph. i'm done being cruel now. don't kill meh!
invizygirl chapter 6 . 2/8/2008
ahh i luv that movie too! even tho 10 things i hate about you is definitely a B movie. interesting chapter. i like christian more and more. update soon.
invizygirl chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
oo awkward! i've decided i like seth tho. good update. more soon.
invizygirl chapter 4 . 1/20/2008
cute. i think i like the relatives and christian. good chap. update soon.
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