|Reviews for Upon Paper Wings|
| Fan Fan chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Great poem. I love reading between some of these lines :)
I think I have a poem similar to point, but yours is a one of a kind :)
| Femme de Dieu chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I really appreciate this poem, despite the fact that I am terrified of snakes. Perhaps that is WHY I appreciate it. For it is an irrational fear, just as those of whom you speak are irrationally stuck in their own emotions, unable to take a step out of themselves and see what else is beyond the "snake pit" of their minds.
I chose to read some of your work, because I was intrigued that you had taken some pieces off for personal reasons. I removed ALL of my work for various reasons of my own. However, I still enjoy a browse through others' on occasion. This one has made me want to read more of yours. ) L.