Reviews for Like Honey
Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
I love the last stanza best. Kudos on excellent writing skills.
Ironic Presence chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
No one reviewed this? Well, I'll set that straight.

Excellent poetry, Sapphire! Awesome! Just two things...

"Runaway from me"- "runaway" is a noun. "Run away" is the action. ;) And also, a little (only a little!) in the middle, I thought the lines were too broken up, but it was fine after that.

Very good otherwise! Keep writing!

Presence