Reviews for Thirty Three Flowers
shadowpreistess chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Great poem it made me sad when I read it. I hope there would be no more shootings and killings but I know that will never happen.
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
This is good. I like that you included everyone, thirty-three. It sounds a little like one that I wrote, 33. Very good emotion. Devastating day and it's good to explain what happened through poetry. Kudos. good job, keep writing!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
That was such a horrible morbid day...just, terrible. This was a beautiful poem though. Wonderful job, that whole situation just sickens me though. God bless.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
...Wow... Very powerful. Great job as always. Such a horrific tragedy...

((Just a few typos, but those don't really matter.))
rira-chan chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
seriously gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes. wonderful work

MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Beautiful. It gave me goosebumps and chills just reading it. What happened that day was horrible, and you captured that feeling and mourned with it. Lovely work as always