Reviews for Thirty Three Flowers
shadowpreistess chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Great poem it made me sad when I read it. I hope there would be no more shootings and killings but I know that will never happen.
EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
This is good. I like that you included everyone, thirty-three. It sounds a little like one that I wrote, 33. Very good emotion. Devastating day and it's good to explain what happened through poetry. Kudos. good job, keep writing!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
That was such a horrible morbid day...just, terrible. This was a beautiful poem though. Wonderful job, that whole situation just sickens me though. God bless.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
...Wow... Very powerful. Great job as always. Such a horrific tragedy...

((Just a few typos, but those don't really matter.))
rira-chan chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
seriously gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes. wonderful work

rira-chan
MirrorMirrorOnTheWall chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Beautiful. It gave me goosebumps and chills just reading it. What happened that day was horrible, and you captured that feeling and mourned with it. Lovely work as always

Shayla