Reviews for Melodies of Life and Death
she smolders chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Reading poems like this make me wish I could play an instrument or have musical talent in general. Something so beautiful as the piano you describe shouldn't have to feel so much loss. Same with you. This is just amazing.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This is excellent! Another amazing poem!

DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
"Creating a symphony of/Distorted destruction"-I love those lines so much. They flow so perfectly and just sound...right. Great job there!

"My lips slicing away at/Angels wings"-Should be "Angels'" with an apostrophe after the 's'. Lovely line, though. It really stunned me when I read it.

I liked this poem a lot, though the end didn't jive for me. Dunno why, but I just didn't like the end all that much.
The Monkey King of Pirates chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This is amazing! I am going to add you to my favorite authors!

Best Wishes!


( i have three acconts so i will add you to them all )
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
WOW. As always. Just another amazing poem with amazing word choice and amazing metaphors from you. Nothing new, really.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
i like the imagery and description in this poem, very vivid. good work

keep writing