Reviews for Animal
Basara chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
well, in someway that's natural to me...very... so i can relate totally...

hehe...

nice!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I loved the last line. Sorry I didn't review sooner, I'm just so freakin sick, it is disgusting. Anyway, great job on this. Short but really good.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
You do know that the first line is six syllables, right? But I don't really care.

Tragic haiku. I hope you're not entirely "lifeless" though.