Reviews for Let Me Life My Life
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
This is an interesting poem, and I can feel a sort of deep resentment in the words. The last line kind of was a sick vibration through my body, just brought it all together in a very good day. Great job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
I can't believe that you're really evil... Great job.

P.S. You used the wrong "your" in letter Y. Just thought I'd point that out.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Interesting style, and it flowed smoothly even though you had to match up what you were saying with the letters.

Nice work. :)

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P.S. I think you meant to put "Let me LiVe my life as the title, but it says "Let me LiFe my Life". Just so you know!