Reviews for Hell Bittersweet
BellonaFlayreRiver chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
i really liked this. good format. the rythm was nice too. lovely.
SnackySnackSnackSnackSnack chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I really like the last line especially.
Frames of Insight chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I love the lines: "Take another look into those

Lying, dying eyes that scream"

It's funny because when you tell yourself that "Everything happens for a reason" you are fine with the line... but when someone else tells you "Everything happens for a reason," you can't help but get angry/feel bitter and helpless.

PS thanks for reviewing my poem! I really appreciate it.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I think every finds hell to be sweet sometimes.

The Idiot Savant chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
An incredibly emotive poems. "Everything happens for a reason". Ah, yes, the usual lies. The ending stanza is a really nice twist on the entire poem. Definitely haunting. You get a real sense of the relationship... There's a depth to it.

Thanks for your reviews, by the way.

X, Idiot Savant
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Hm, I didn't think it was too bad. For sure not my favourite piece, but not my least favourite. It was pretty good, actually.

lovelaced chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
This was really good. You created a very good image and the words flowed very well. Great job!