|Reviews for Ships Of The Immortal|
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Huzzah for sailing. It's a pleasant past time, I've heard.
I like the idea of the white-dyed robe, because it's like trying to be innocent and faily miserably because white stains so easily ...
Plus, the contrast between white robe and dark wood is quite sensational.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
I like the idea of this, but it's feeling a bit abrupt to me. I mean, obviously these are going to be abrupt, but this one seems like it just cuts off in the middle of a thought. Pretty scene, though. Keep writing! :)
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Great detail with this. I love how your still writing your unique poems. Keep up the good work.