|Reviews for Innocence's Homicide|
| CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Hm. Your very good in the whole imagery department. _
| SirScott chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Does the boy or girl have the painted finger nails? This was a deep poem and a little weird.
| Camilleta chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Good. Beautiful even. And you're right, that wasn't what I expected at all.
Thanks for the R&R. _ Sorry I'm not good at giving it back lol.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
That last line is spectacular.
Then again, so is the whole thing, but you probably knew that I would say that.
| aridelaine chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I liked that. The story inside of the poem was great and I loved the imagery! keep writing!
| Sarah Supernova chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Wow. Your word choices are really strong and I could see this happening in my mind. I love it!