Reviews for Dream Saga
the enchanted cheesy soybean chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
Gah... this made me wanna bathe in liberal amounts of bug spray. Something that might make this better is a description of how the bug felt. *shiver* better yet, leave it alone. I don't think I should very much like more descriptions. Bugs with sharp appendages creep me out.

*~-~*Cheesy Soy*~-~*
the enchanted cheesy soybean chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Intriguing. I like your descriptions, love. Though more creative verbs would add a nice tang to your sentences.

*~-~*Cheesy Soy*~-~*