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  the enchanted cheesy soybean chapter 2 . 6/1/2007 Gah... this made me wanna bathe in liberal amounts of bug spray. Something that might make this better is a description of how the bug felt. *shiver* better yet, leave it alone. I don't think I should very much like more descriptions. Bugs with sharp appendages creep me out. *~-~*Cheesy Soy*~-~* |
| the enchanted cheesy soybean chapter 1 . 6/1/2007 Intriguing. I like your descriptions, love. Though more creative verbs would add a nice tang to your sentences. *~-~*Cheesy Soy*~-~* |