Reviews for Confessions of a Suicidal Emo Girl
Psychobabble6 chapter 71 . 4/30/2009
o.O That's a lot of imagery in this one. By the way, I like that new thing you're doing, with the parentheses.
WhisperInTheDark chapter 71 . 4/23/2009
Nice, nice, very nice.

Ribbons of trust is a very good metaphor...

And thanks for the advice on my stories!

I will try some music. I think it's just a matter of finding the right kind of music for that particular story...


Psychobabble6 chapter 70 . 4/22/2009
Oh, that's very cool :). Your stuff is pretty sweet. You're so good at choosing the right word.
WhisperInTheDark chapter 70 . 4/21/2009
"Stars like needles, wishing on sharpness

Never enough to see through (to nothing)"

That part in particular was very good.

Good imagery.


WhisperInTheDark chapter 69 . 4/21/2009
It's got a certain pace to it...

I'm tempted to put it on my wall in my room..

Would you mind if I did?


WhisperInTheDark chapter 68 . 4/21/2009
I really like this one.

The saltwater and red carbon was my favorite...

And sometimes it is human nature..


WhisperInTheDark chapter 66 . 5/3/2008
oh its very good, very raw emotion i guess you could say... i like it
WhisperInTheDark chapter 53 . 5/3/2008
i think this is one of my favorites
WhisperInTheDark chapter 47 . 5/3/2008
true true very true
WhisperInTheDark chapter 46 . 5/3/2008
i really like this one
Psychobabble6 chapter 42 . 5/1/2008

So when's the last time you posted...what, a million years ago? XD

I really like number 34, Self-Loathing. It's just so angry and emotional and powerful.

In number 36, Love 2, I especially like the line "I do" because it implies more than just saying "I do love you." It implies commitment, and added to the sadness of it.

In number 40, Tears, I really, really liked the imagery. Really. So...emo XD I really liked that one.

Okay, I liked the rest, too. I've already gotten used to your material XD. And I appreciate this style of poetry now more, too. I like 'em. They're sad :(. Carly, be happy. Smile.
WhisperInTheDark chapter 42 . 5/1/2008
hm...deep. who is the he you are reffering to? just wondering...
WhisperInTheDark chapter 40 . 5/1/2008
i cant say why, but this one really speaks to me... great and true as always
WhisperInTheDark chapter 30 . 4/23/2008
aw. i really like this one cause it is oh i dont know the word! very very good
WhisperInTheDark chapter 25 . 4/23/2008
i love that song, if u meant the black parade by MCR. they are my inspiration
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