o.O That's a lot of imagery in this one. By the way, I like that new thing you're doing, with the parentheses.

Nice, nice, very nice.

Ribbons of trust is a very good metaphor...

And thanks for the advice on my stories!

I will try some music. I think it's just a matter of finding the right kind of music for that particular story...

Peace,

~WIND~

Oh, that's very cool :). Your stuff is pretty sweet. You're so good at choosing the right word.

"Stars like needles, wishing on sharpness

Never enough to see through (to nothing)"

That part in particular was very good.

Good imagery.

Peace,

~LBW~

It's got a certain pace to it...

I'm tempted to put it on my wall in my room..

Would you mind if I did?

Peace,

~LBW~

I really like this one.

The saltwater and red carbon was my favorite...

And sometimes it is human nature..

Peace,

~WIND~

oh its very good, very raw emotion i guess you could say... i like it

i think this is one of my favorites

true true very true

i really like this one

o.O

So when's the last time you posted...what, a million years ago? XD

I really like number 34, Self-Loathing. It's just so angry and emotional and powerful.

In number 36, Love 2, I especially like the line "I do" because it implies more than just saying "I do love you." It implies commitment, and added to the sadness of it.

In number 40, Tears, I really, really liked the imagery. Really. So...emo XD I really liked that one.

Okay, I liked the rest, too. I've already gotten used to your material XD. And I appreciate this style of poetry now more, too. I like 'em. They're sad :(. Carly, be happy. Smile.

hm...deep. who is the he you are reffering to? just wondering...

i cant say why, but this one really speaks to me... great and true as always

aw. i really like this one cause it is so...so oh i dont know the word! very very good

i love that song, if u meant the black parade by MCR. they are my inspiration