Reviews for Pearls Part Two chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
So.. This was a really good poem, but the only problem is that stupid people like me can hardly read stuff that's all crammed together so we tend to skip around and think about coffee and songs and stuff that isn't related to the poem. Except I can read most of it if I start from the bottom.

So yeah. Really, I guess that's all I can say 'cause I already said it's a good poem. Oh yeah. I think I noticed some slant rhyming. Very cool.