once again, well written. you are loved by a random insomniac reviewer *waves*. I really enjoy your style!

yOU may have the love of a random person who is...eating pizza rolls with a spoon..I shall add you to my favorites, ha ha. Yes. Your writing is really good.

Interesting, well-written musings, but not quite substantial. While it was nice reading this, it was the sort of nice I associate with touching something soft. Momentary enjoyment. Nothing huge, but simple. It's well-written enough, but it doesn't have enough... meat to it, I suppose. It doesn't feel memorable and deep, though it is rather beautiful, in a sad way. Hm...

Woah, this was truly amazing.

You expressed yourself ever so well.

The line "My family is bound by blood and blood alone" was really deep and powerful, the whole piece was powerful.

Great work!