|Reviews for Welcome Back|
| SassyLil'Thunderstorm chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Weird, I never reviewed this. I guess sometimes you spend so much time thinking about what to say that you think you actually did it.
I do like this poem, I like how it reflects a bigger picture. And I like how you took the situation and flipped it into something positive, instead of worrying about stupid little girls. Only thing that I kind of dont like is the listing of random words. Its not random in the sense that its misplaced. I think you did well in saying things later that tied it into the poem as a whole. But I got the same feeling as when I got Beyonce's newest CD, I know i'm a fan and I know that it reflects a lot of your personality but in doing so it made me feel like i'm on the outside of an inside joke. I get it on one level, but not in its totality. So it makes me feel a little distanced.
Anyway, welcome back. It was a good return.
| TaraC chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
What can I say other than this is a heartfelt poem? It screams individuality, complexity, and realness. It's different and I felt a part of myself in this poem. Welcome Back!