You're an amazing writer and congratz on the 300 pieces of brilliance you have submitted to this site (even though you've submitted 303 now).. .. ..By the way, I've just added you to my fave author list because you rock.

Keep writing.

~**~Indiana~**~

300 WOW! I seriously need to get in line. Man, you make me look pathetic. I havn't even written anything today. *slaps self*

Anyway, this is a great poem. I loved the last line. Great job.

I'd love to do that...

I think you meant "lean" in the second line.

Nice job.