Reviews for Stupid Old Banjo
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
It is very frank and is written in plain language, but I love how you've written it like that. I've certainly felt the feeling of being in the shadows and being in love. My favourite line here is 'there's a heart in every barbwire gate'. To me this illustrates your point of the 'fence' between two worlds(in a sense) as well as hearts getting caught in the barbed wire.
Abysmal Tr3pidation chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
This poem is beautiful and although the title seems to state otherwise it is very deep. Amazing job...

Keep writing.

Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Love is a pain. That much is true. Great poem.