|Reviews for Fake Smile|
| Crymson Tears chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
...good poem. *tear* DA**IT! gah. All this guilt all at once. All i can say is I'm sorry.
| Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
interesting poem... just some advice, i would make your vocabulary stronger- i know that for me, stronger vocab makes my poems a lot better...just a suggestion...
| Ryuuka chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Really wonderful poem. I feel like this at times, too, so I can relate. Good work. :D
| unshattered chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Incredible, I never expected it to end like that but I really loved it!
| Suicidal Romance chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Aw, maams, I used to feel like this sho much...But now, I think that I feel like one of the people that force the happiness upon those who want to show their tears...And I hate myself for that...I hated having to show only one side of me, and now I'm the one pushing others for that...
P.S. U really think Stuart's too good for her?
| sweets555 chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
great job! its very true, and it works well.
(and no, its not mean)