Reviews for I know there's a light somewhere |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I finished the book... I NEED SEQUEL |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOOOWWWW! you have been working on this story for a LONGGGGG time! |
![]() ![]() Aww |
![]() ![]() Okay, I haven't read very much but I already like where it's going, BUT what really confuses me is your formatting. I honestly don't know when a new scene happens because it all looks the same? I constantly have to go back an re-read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so frustrated, I kinda of wish I didn't start reading this fic. \ Not saying you're a bad author, I just want to beat the fuck out of those guys. I'm pissed at the story. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The most intense story I have ever read in my life. I have always found an interest in stories pertaining to these topics(and no I'm not I'm not some depressed person, or a victim of anything), but I have to say this story actually scared me. I have never read a story dealing with suicide. So that one part scared me shitless. Once I realized what was happening (at end)I almost never finished they story. I found myself feeling like Alexis, in how she missed zach so much. But really well written story (aside from the very descriptive details, and violence-those were scary). Sorry if this review is a bit of a *SPOIL ALERT* Just have to decide now if I want to put it on my favourites list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so had she cut herself again or not? i'm confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what about logon? he's one of the main guys |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was amazing and heartbreaking at some points. but still if i was a publisher I'd publish you.-jblstark |
![]() ![]() ![]() The romance, pain, etc. seemed to be laid on a little thick, but maybe that's what you were going for. Also, you seem to enjoy dialogue a little much. Description of the scene is just as, if not more so, important as the people in the scene. Think about revising? A.S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay first of all, a day is too short. Way too short. At least make it a week! Annd you use a LOT of a dialogue, so much so that I find it hard to picture the scene in my head. Also, anyone that has experienced severe grief WOULD understand why someone would cut themselves. That said, I do love this story and I'm glad you're having a go at rewriting it :) YourCritic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dammit, I'm getting all teary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story brought me to tears at times. It was good, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story touches my heart in more ways than one could imagine. Alexis is me. I went through her pain. It is so hard to go through. The only difference is I never had a 'Logan' or a 'Riley' to help me through the pain |