|Reviews for The Seminary Gang II: A Fallen World|
| You know who chapter 20 . 8/16/2014
I always forget how awesome this is. Easily the coolest thing we did in highschool
| apple chapter 20 . 4/15/2008
WOW! I totally forgot about this, I finally finished though! So be happy, now I have to get going on the Third one, no? I have written my fate, that sound alot like Jon.
| Diane Smith chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
I would so love to kick you right now, Richard...
You haven't the slightest clue how lucky you are...
Be nice to your editors...
Or your edits are late :)
| Diane Smith chapter 19 . 2/20/2008
There is no need for violence, especially since you only know my character in the book...so shove off :)
| Audrey chapter 16 . 2/5/2008
Sorry for the long absence, things happened...
but no jon in this chapter, sad, but I can feel it wrapping up...So was I right? Oh well, it doesnt matter much, I hope that what I have said will help the story, I have a feeling that I havent said much though...I'm going to just keep reading...
| Meer der Sterne chapter 20 . 1/12/2008
Oh lookee here, there's going to be another. Will this be a trilogy? I loved the story, and am looking forward to the third.
| Meer der Sterne chapter 19 . 1/12/2008
Wow. Kenzi is feeling something, they're figuring it all out, and Brian of all people saves the day. I feel like stabbing Kimmi for some reason. Onto the last!
| Meer der Sterne chapter 18 . 1/12/2008
Then they grabbed them. Nice chapter, fairly uneventful but humorous.
| Meer der Sterne chapter 17 . 1/12/2008
Ah, so John is dead. When you said they were all live I got a little confused. Oh well. Now they're going back and grabbing those lost in time. It's just so fun playing with time, isn't it? Three more chapters to go!
| Meer der Sterne chapter 16 . 1/12/2008
Poor John. I'm confused as to whether he is dead or not. I guess I'll know next chapter. Now they have a prisoner of their own now. Heh heh.
To the next!
| Meer der Sterne chapter 15 . 1/12/2008
And it all falls to pieces just after I stop reading doesn't it? It's like the story couldn't hold itself together knowing that I; of all people, was not reading it so faithfully.
Good chapter ;)
Going onto the next.
| Double A chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
I have been going over TSG recently, and feel it is important to understand Charlie's genenology, I mean if you shoot Kenzi no more Charlie(though that might cause a paradox, but there should have been several all over this story). Charlie has eight great-grandperants(including Kenzi) and I bet that we know several of them, I mean we know the character, but we don't know that their related to her. anyways on to the real reson I'm reviewing, just out of couriosity, on a hunch, might you possibly tell me... you know Collin? Of course you do he went to TAR with us, but uh... WHAT WAS HIS LAST NAME?
Keep writing! Double A
p.s. when ya ganna post the third one?
| audrey chapter 11 . 1/8/2008
the only way, I had to, Now I think I understand. Jade has been marked for death, but if they had escaped what was going on, and now Jon knows where she is why hasn't he come back? Unless kenzi has some way that she can remotly kill jade, thats it isn't it...Thats WHY JON can't Join them. blackmail! thats brilliant! but kenzi seems ignorant...its CHARLIE! HAH! am I right?
| audrey chapter 10 . 1/8/2008
I could have sworen that I reviewed this already but I guess not. YEAH thats right me kick ass, and taking names, but jon being my superior, now thats different, but your still my lovable badass.
| Audrey chapter 9 . 1/4/2008
me? me special enough to get inside this wounderous story? how thoughtful of you...dont forget that I am older though, and dont forget, you could never break me
and I could never break you...