|Reviews for 32|
| in your head chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
I know what your talking about. Sad and nice poem.
| M.D.Irvine chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
i read this and although I didn't realize what it was about till the end, i agreed that it is sad but true how we really never appreciate our life, family and friends until tragedy strikes.
I wanted to comment on the beginning as well" 32 lives cut short 32 stories that didn't end ... " you have it all on one line and i think you meant to have the *32 stories..* start on the next line.
I don't know what else to say here, I have never written poetry and not sure I'm critiquing right.
| d1ng089 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
damn, dude. that shit makes you think. good poem. took till the last line for me to realize what its message was, and that last line hits ya!
havent talked to you in a long time! this is bakedo, man! made a new account and started writing again :D
i see you're writing a new alpha squadron story! i shall R&R when i get a few minutes to sit :)