|Reviews for Girl for Hire|
| crazydaisyyy chapter 7 . 1/21
I love it so far!
| dels chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
I am mad at this ending.
So this is what cliff hangers feel like...
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| The-Darkest-Blue chapter 12 . 5/9/2013
A very good chapter, I see. It's good- and we all saw this romance coming *grins*. The descriptions are quite good, but I often find myself thinking that Evy is a bit dumb. I mean, its obvious he loves her.
Or maybe its just that I'm the kind of girl who almost always knows how the story ends before I've gotten there.
Bad habbit, I know.
But I do loved being suprised; kind of expected, but only in stories.
What I hate the most is weak females... Like, 'Oh I know he abuses me but I love him so so so much!' chicks. But then I end up liking them.
OK, off topic now. Rambling officially over. :P
Keep on writing,
| hopelessromantic0160 chapter 12 . 4/14/2013
I love this story! I hope Evian goes back to her real self soon! Can't wait until they finally get together-for real-and the whole Jennifer mess is figured out. Also, we haven't heard from Marina lately...is she gonna be back soon? Please update soon. Sorry for saying that: I know authors hate when readers say that.
| Gentlewater chapter 12 . 3/26/2013
Wow, it would have been nice to add 1 or 2 chapters to end the romance.
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/15/2012
lovely she gets kissed
| noriepie chapter 12 . 7/25/2012
Would you believe it this is so good tears are coming out. I'm actually crying because I was THAT absorbed with the story and didn't even realize the time. I don't know why, even though the theme is cliched I formed a connection with the character because she was such an awesome normal easy going albeit a bit timid (who wouldn't with an international star?) and to see her, SEE her make herself change was really heartbreaking because she really didn't need to, I hated the 'losing yourself with no confidence bit' - because it's relatable. I mean it's easy to tell yourself the same thing over and over again until you get lost in it. This was all spiraling down from Jeniffer as a catalyst and I CAN'T believe he didn't come back the WHOLE night! Evy may not be demanding explanations but I WILL! Curiosity killed the cat but the cat is very brave! You won't learn if you are not curious, no? I want to know what went DOWN suga! By the way I love true 'what would marina do' mantra lol I love it when she goes saucy. Nata...he's an ass, mainly because he didn't even have the courtesy to...idk...explain? Fight? Confront? She told him to go that night and he left...and then I don't know...pretend to care or be hurt UGH he's more hot and cold than the British weather! I'm telling you, haven't been this hooked in a story for a while and this is the longest review I have ever written!
Hmmm constructive criticisms...nothing really I'm still on an emotional high. I sometimes wonder with some things, the practical aspects of the story you know? Like for example, why does she have to be cooped up in the room it's not like anybody gonna stop her she can go swimming or use the spa and sauna using the hotel facilities right? I know ur was Jorge's orders but it doesn't seem like there are bodyguards outside the hotel room with people coming in and out anyways...like I get it when Marina came as a surprise there was a bodyguard, but how did Jenniffer got past and started banging on the door? If I was her I'd definitely take advantage of the room service...also why is she the one paying for her self inflicted makeover she is doing this for the job, hence the changing appearance side should be sponsored by the publicity fund right? Most brand shops start asskissing celebrities by giving free items especially when they are hot topics in public to increase their brand name. I don't know how Jorge was screening Marina's phone call to her in the hotel during those times she was by herself doesn't she have a cellphone?
So yeah...just wondering, idk if what I think about is silly because Im sure there are answers somewhere if I think about them hard enough, right?
| twibbit chapter 12 . 5/6/2012
It's been like 3 years since u updated... It's so interesting :p update soon please :)
| Thinkalike chapter 12 . 2/26/2012
Well.. that was a really hard cliffhanger (i think thats how it spelled?), and you haven't updated in so long. But my hope is that you will return and complete this story, because I really want to know what will happen and so on!
So glad i found this story, but it would be even better if I knew how it all gonna end :)
Please update, and finish the story! Love your writing so, so much. :D
| Hearts chapter 12 . 12/25/2011
Thats it? Nooo! It's been almost FOUR years... please do update!
| blythely chapter 12 . 11/4/2011
how could you just leave it hanging like this? i am absolutely salivating for more.
| ilovethisstory chapter 12 . 10/28/2011
This story is AMAZING! I hope you update soon because you left at a huge cliffhanger.
| HiHelloMisterBear chapter 12 . 9/12/2011
I was getting all pumped up and getting ready to press the next chapter button and BOOM NO NEXT CHAPTER BUTTON!
Dang you. Dang you to hell.
| Amy Stardust chapter 12 . 8/19/2011
Oh, my gosh! I LOVE THS STORY! XD
I hope you update! Please! Please! Please!