Reviews for Stained Lips
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
The phrase "stained lips" really made the haiku I think, which is brilliant as usual.
CrazyTurtles chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I like the idea here. Great job
Basara chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
sweet...relieving isn't it?

nice...
Thenardier chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
This is lovely, as it is powerful. The words are simple, yet poignant. A nicely done piece.
angel953 chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
haiku. nice. i suck at it though wish i were as powerful as yours are great job
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Whoa, I love how people can put so much in three lines of a haiku. It just kinda blows my mind :O So, so powerful.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Oo, I loved this. The last line was brilliant. Great job!