Reviews for dontsayyou love me
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
this seems much more open and speech-like than most of your stuff. a lot of lines in here i could really see someone saying out loud. i like the tone- it seems honest and personal.

ohwow, and that beginning line is pitch-perfect. the ending is good too. in the middle of this you seem to have a little disdain for the person, and then at the end you're sad you can't give them more.
riotmaker chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
i absolutely love the whole thing. especially the first few lines and "because you give and give and give".
Alyosha Karamazov chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
I love this. Because it's different. Let me tell you my favorite parts?

"Wouldyou blame me if I told you I was scared?

My speechlessness should make it

obvious"

ah. Beautiful. And then the last two lines are perfect and ring of finality. i love that you can bring me right into the situatuion and what's going on without being overly-specific. I feel I know what's going on without actually knowing, which is good in poetry. Bravo.
Doxology chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
I can relate to this in a very great but very vague way. I just love it. Has to go on my favorites.

Peace and Love

Lifted