Reviews for Sleeping Town
TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
It has beauty, imagery, and solid descriptions, but there's no emotion to it. There's no heart, feeling, or personality. Where's the meaning? Where's the touch of "you" in it? Sometimes poems ARE just beautiful pictures (this applies), and they can't have emotion (I still think this applies). All that means is that it's in a different category of poetry (for me, at least), and that I don't think it could ever be as good as poetry that has a personality and a heart.