Reviews for Chinese Lantern
Basara chapter 1 . 5/1/2007

ecwix chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Hmm, what struck me right away was that the middle line only seems to have 6 syllables... unlike the 7 traditionally seen in a haiku. Done on purpose?

Interesting imagery :).
Charlotte Makepeace chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
I loved it. It's simple (...well, haikus are) but i can picture the scene. You used the right words. Well done!
peteygirl chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
i like this one too! i have now read all of your works. and they're great. there for! FAVORITE AUTHOR LIST AND! ALERT LIST!