Reviews for Never Believe
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
This poem is great and full of emotion. Nice work
rhyddid chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
I think this poem is great and it demands people to see you as an individual, which is really cool!
Circus Caprice chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Man am I glad you had poetry to vent your emotions through before you went out and hurt somebody with your pent up feelings.

I thought it was ok until the ending, and the ending really hooked me.

"I am me. I am me. I am me. I am me./ And I will never believe."

I think it was the italics on never that did it for me.

Anyway, I could feel you through your poem, which is all any poet could want.

Thanks for the read.
Zutara Livs On chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Oh, wow, that was awesome. That's so me. Take one look at my surroundings, and I automatically believe, but I don't!

It's so hard to believe in something there's absolutely no proof of. I know that's sort of what faith is for, but I'm a fact-type of person. Thanks again for sharing your startlingly true feelings.

Stay true to yourself and keep writing,

It's definitely worth it if there are people out there to hear you.

Jelly Bean
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
So heartfelt. Nice work.

-P.Q.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
right there with ya