Reviews for Glass Box
angie hofer chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
I love it. It tells a story and it isn't just rambling.
SpyTrap chapter 1 . 12/10/2003
"My eyes stare out, saddened." Saddened by what, exactly?
"Free me... this place." I'm having a difficult time picturing someone saying that. Obviously, it's quite metaphorical, but IMO it disrupts the flow of the poem when I struggle to picture someone actually speaking those words.
"Pennaceous wings." Isn't that a bit redundant? Dunno. Maybe not.
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I didn't think it was depressing at all- quite the opposite, in fact. I liked it.
one-and-da-same chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
cool! very strong imagry or whatever you call it. I absolutely LOVE this poem, it's wonderful. Keep up the good work.
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 5/14/2002
yes, but not depressing enough, I was trying to find a poem called "I live in a box" but this is quite similar, good poem
soil chapter 1 . 3/23/2001
!wow! this is Really cool
poetrysdeadremarks chapter 1 . 3/22/2001
Very .