Reviews for The Unexpected Visitor
seventhchords chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I enjoyed the way you made the line between reality and hysteria so blurred in this piece. However, I thought the overall impact of the story might've been greater if you omitted certain parts, and been a little more discreet with the details, to keep the reader guessing. That's just me, though. Good effort; keep it up!