Reviews for egodystonic
Basara chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
brightly doom...

nice...
The Hawks Reject chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Yes, very Doomish

Its Good, very Powerful

Some "Formalization" would help you a lot such as Capitalization
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
love the last line. very pretty and descriptive poem. nice work.