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Reviews for
egodystonic
Basara
chapter 1 .
5/1/2007
brightly doom...
nice...
The Hawks Reject
chapter 1 .
4/30/2007
Yes, very Doomish
Its Good, very Powerful
Some "Formalization" would help you a lot such as Capitalization
recycle rhymes
chapter 1 .
4/30/2007
love the last line. very pretty and descriptive poem. nice work.