just 'finished' this story i need to really finish it. its too good

Oh god, i need to finish reading this...this is just too good. Like MY fantasies...

Love the story. Sorry that people kept plagiarizing you. :(

But Dorian sounds awesome and I'd love to see how this played out.

Ditto my last review on "Much Better" and ditto the question.

Ahh, this is so great. I've been looking forever for a good story to read, and I find one, and then... disappointment. I personally believe all plagiarizers should organize a mass suicide and stop ruining it for everyone else. But then, that's mean. Oh well. I love this! (:

Lol,what a great start! I was just wondering, what is dorian's story all about?

funny and so lovable. I love those story I hate those idios who rip off great people.

I read this before it was taken down, just a few short weeks before-I vistied that Bluebell Butterfly or dumbass butterfly whatever her name is, and I was left fuming when I discovered every SINGLE sentence matched urs, except a few name changes.

And do you know how much it RILED me, when I discovered that in order to "deter" people from finding out what she'd done-yes, she put in "different" cliffhangers, which in fact was just your words but cut off early and then continued in the next chapter.

ERGHITGHDRIU! Thanks for pointing her out tho. I'm pretty shocked hasn't pulled it yet; but hey-I bet she had a shock when she opened her inbox-though the fact she left anonymous reviewers review suggest she actually GETS OFF on people telling her to fuck off.

I hate story plagarists. And I support you whole-heartedly-

Peace

Hey, remember me? The crazy girl who got all excited about the plagerized version of this story of yours? Look... I'm really sorry about that, about the girl ripping you off and all. I shouldn't have gotten so worked up about it. I just wanted to say to YOU, not the girl of , that this idea was genius (the story). I'm really sorry again.

After reading this I feel even worse for you having to remove yor stories, such a pity but I guess I would have done the exact same thing.

Plagiarizers really do suck.

Your story is great and I like it. :)

It's too bad, though, that someone would copy this and claim this as their own.

I'm so sorry to hear about your fiction being plagiarized. To think that someone had the gall to take your work and basically put their name on it is absurd. You are an amazing writer and I hope that you might possibly pursue it as a career. I would most certainly read your books. Best wishes.

i have her email

BLUE BUTTERFLY EMAIL IS

Wow, sorry your stories are getting ripped off and im sorry you wont be posting anymore. Will there be somewhere else you will be posting or we can read them? I love your work, especially the visions of you series. Whatever happens good luck in the future. fingers crossed you get published :D

*sigh*

I'm really sorry that you, like so many others (especially today!) are the victim of plagiarism. I really wish people would just enjoy a good thing and give credit where it's due-I don't understand why a person even feels the need to steal someone else's intellectual property. It's fictionpress, but it's still the conception, the written work, the creation of another person and to just pass it on as your work is just wrong.

Sadly, although I was a fan of Much Better since you first started writing it, I only started reading this particular story a few hours before you started removing it. Terrible timing, huh? *sigh* I was really looking forward to reading the rest too...

Anyway, I wish you luck in all your future endeavors, and I hope that one day you write as well. I also hope that the plagiarist realizes what she (or he) has done because it's an injustice to the author, as well as the readers, when something like this happens.

Thank you for sharing your work with us while it was still available. Your writing, for a while now, has made me smile and I'm glad to have had the opportunity to read and enjoy it.

-Amethyst