To be honest I'm not sure how I feel about her controlling his mind. I hope she puts it back but I was wondering before how he was going to fall for her when he's obiviously attached.

However I still hope she gives his memories back. I'd feel terrible. She's manipulationg him and he is still Cassandra's despite the fact that she's still on paper.

Oh well maybe that will come later.

Sorry in my last review I was so concrened with parallel reality theory that I didn't think about the theory of him just being conjured into existance.

Still Brilliant!

Absolutely can't wait for the next chapter.

WOW!

I don't think I've read something like this before.

Though the main character does seem a bit desperate I suppose if Dorian really is all that.

Don't she and Cassandra have the same or similar names, this is going to be hard to explain.

Are her books influencing his reality or is his reality influencing her books?

This is a great start.

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

AH

i'm so excited about this story

being the readaholic that i am, the whole charaters-out-of-a-book-coming-alive thing is a favorite

story seems good so far, keep it up!

:O This is a) totally well written, and b) such an interesting plot idea. I will definitley looking for updates on this, so you had better be shelling them out. :D

-Sally Can Wait

WOW. This is going to be INTERESTING! *wants more*