Reviews for Changing
pixieofdarkness chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
your poetry puts me to shame shane, it really does, good job, and the way you wrote this, the format, made the piece stronger.
felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Babe, the picture's cool, but ... you're green now! Is that really it or is the color setting on my screen off? It's hot in any case. *grins* Huzzah for Bread.

Whoa. Unexpectedly dark (you tend to stay more on the light side of things, love) and heavy. Heavy, laden with emotion and emotional bagage.

But it's strong and great. The last stanza is a little odd and seems to be a bit forced, but ... other than that, no complaints here.

In the second-to-last stanza, I liked the mention of the filter. Seems ironic (a little bit) when it seems this is about drug use. Just a little.

Well writ, my love.


DeathMetal18 chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
damn. This was pretty good. I liked it. It made sense and made me think of shit I did to feel this way... You bastard. Great work man.

-Twilight Wolf
My Brighter Darkness chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
...You think you're bad at poetry? This is awesome. I wish I could write like this.