Reviews for Sometimes
Nokturnal Augury chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
D: That was so sad... It's something everybody can relate to in SOME degree, which I think makes it a really effective way to share your emotions with the readers.
surrealphobia chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
This poem is really different. I enjoyed how you the lines, it gave it forcefullness and filled it with emotion. Great job

Surreal
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
OMG! Yes I know how this feels! It sucks, but don't wait forever. Keep up the great work!

Kristie Marie
Chaolioe chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Wow, that was really a beautiful expression of emotions.. and if you really feel that way, you're a very strong, down-to-earth person for biting your lip.

This piece had wonderful flow... it was a relaxing flow actually, but as I said, it captured the emotions very nicely.