I REALLY like this poem. Very well written. Good job.

Hmm, in this piece, the narrator seems to be very contradictive. It makes things confusing because of the narrator's complex characteristics, but that's what I like about it. :P I got to realize a lot of things about people after reading this.

I really liked this poem! I love how it shows that what a person is doing on the outside can be totally different from what they're actually feeling on the inside.

Keep up the good work, I wouldn't mind reading more from you. :)