|Reviews for Picture It|
| Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Very thought provoking haiku. Very original, it challenges the reader to look at their lives and where they belong. Wonderful haiku, going on my favorites.
| Suave Dares chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
nice haiku, with beautiful imagery.
great point and i loved how u sent the message across.
| Basara chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
hm... i fit in the spaces of nothingness of life's oucasted realms? lol...
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
You can try to imagine the world in the poem. This is a great haiku. Great job.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Gee, I've been wondering about that myself... I really have no idea.
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
I imagined painting pictures of humanity on my eyelids. Crazy but beautiful imagery here. Last line was perfect. Great job.