Reviews for Picture It
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Very thought provoking haiku. Very original, it challenges the reader to look at their lives and where they belong. Wonderful haiku, going on my favorites.

Peace, Daze
Suave Dares chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
nice haiku, with beautiful imagery.

great point and i loved how u sent the message across.

good job.
Basara chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
hm... i fit in the spaces of nothingness of life's oucasted realms? lol...

nice...
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
You can try to imagine the world in the poem. This is a great haiku. Great job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Gee, I've been wondering about that myself... I really have no idea.

Great haiku.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
I imagined painting pictures of humanity on my eyelids. Crazy but beautiful imagery here. Last line was perfect. Great job.