Reviews for Systematic and Razor Sharp
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
sounds almost like you're making fun of angst poetry. idk, that's just the vibe i got off it.
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
A really gripping poem. It even leaves the reader feeling enraged. Good work!

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a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
WOW! You sound SO much like me in this piece, or the way I would have written it out if I had been so eloquent in expressing my emotions. This is an amazing favourite.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
"So what's the point writing another poem, when they all seem the same?"

I feel like this a lot. This really was an emotional and wonderful poem. I can relate a lot. Great job.