|Reviews for Ribbon Lies Around My Neck|
| hide your eyes chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
I liked it, the no punctuation-ness made it seem like a fast confession kind of thing.
| SirScott chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Why do women always want to change men?
| MKSub chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
This was powerful. I liked it. But I think you should put in some punctuation, because I got confused at points.
| Nonya Soum chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
Strong. I especially like the 3rd and 4th stanzas and the last 4 lines (I drink it in like piano song/And poetry because I’ve/Always enjoyed the most these/Things that slowly kill me). It's just a great poem. Even though there's a lot of running words together in an endless breath, that style seems to work for you. It makes the poem that much stronger and deeper. Great job!