Reviews for Dirty
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
God... That's creepy. This one speaks directly to me. I know someone like this. E. Very good.
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
this is neat...

ps-thanks for the review
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Interesting. This could refer to one person or to men as a whole. I personally think it's about a single one man, but I didn't write this, so who knows? Anyway, I thought this was well written and I did enjoy it. It felt disjointed, but in a way that worked for the haiku.
Chameleon81 chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Very nice indeed. Intriguing. Thought provoking. I liked it.
Basara chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
hm... intruiging... hm... the 'evilness' of man?

Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
a really cohesive haiku, all the parts work together well to create a very clear idea of the 'he' you are describing. makes me think of drowning and self-destruction. cool - I like it a lot. cheers.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
I'm not very good at haiku, but I still enjoyed this. The last line was intriguing and made me think a lot. Great job.