Reviews for Désolé
ValkyreFF chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Wow. I can't even think of anything else to say other than that. It was amazing. I need to e-mail it to my latest ex! Oh, I noticed that you accidentally left out the word 'for' in the line "Arigato, thank you being a friend"
skippydabeaver chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
I'm sorry you seem to think that you aren't a good writer, because really-this is amazing work. You should be proud of yourself. Keep writing please!
Lunar Eclipse1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Nice poem. I like the use of different languages to get the meaning across (heh, I tend to do that with franglais). I like the way you organized it (4 lines,followed by four stanzas of 10, and ending with 4 lines again - nice symmetry). The repetition works well and helps to build a rhythm. And the rhyme is nice (I know some people don't like rhyme, but it works really well). I am a little confused with the overall meaning, as I try to apply it to my own experiences. I feel like there are two opposites contrasting here, but I do enjoy that sort of thing, and maybe it's just me. Anyways, good job.