|Reviews for It was suddenly quiet|
| Sam chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Hey :D look what I found! Trip down memory lane much? XD
| Frosthold chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
Very, very good! It had a very good air of mystery about it and was quite funny at the end.
| Agapantha chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
You know that I think this is a great story, sorry, though, but I do agree with Puppymobile, 'cos i noticed that when i read it before. Juss wanted to tell you I betya gonna get an A* 'cos its brill.
| R.L. Keane chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
I love it! Your descriptions are beautiful and your wording is very good. Keep writing!
| puppymobile chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
A great use of a simple subject. It showed a great use of understandment (if that's a word) and had a fantastic air of mystery. I really liked it, coz it mirroed EXACTLY how I feel when I take (took, whatever) school reports home. It had the perfect amout of ddread, anxiety and fear in it, and I couldn't find a single fault in it, apart from this one:
"It felt heavy now, as heavy as a bag of bricks, and the girl, Bethany, was filled with a sense of pure dread. "
It was fine, but you didn't really need to say the girl's name. It kinda spoilt the atmosphere. You seemed to spend the whole story avoiding sying it and then it just pops up in the middle and is fogotten again. Just my view, you don't have to listen. It was really good, I can't write as well as that.