Reviews for Dry Wine Drawings
pigeon feet chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
"Once upon a time a little girl

Played with poetry and fell into

A gray casket that played piano

Song as the Raven continued

To sing death into her veins but

She loved this loveless way to live

Until a kiss breathed unwanted life

Into her lungs so she could die again

Love stories always perish first"

That entire end is ravishing. Good work!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Great last line.

Sorry it's taken me forever to review your things. This weeks has been...busy. Let's just leave it at that.

Anyways, great poem (as always!).

SirScott chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Some love story last. Great poem.

Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I love the way you word things.

It seems like you have a unique way of writing poems, which is a good thing.