Reviews for Dry Wine Drawings
pigeon feet chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
"Once upon a time a little girl

Played with poetry and fell into

A gray casket that played piano

Song as the Raven continued

To sing death into her veins but

She loved this loveless way to live

Until a kiss breathed unwanted life

Into her lungs so she could die again

Love stories always perish first"

That entire end is ravishing. Good work!
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Great last line.

Sorry it's taken me forever to review your things. This weeks has been...busy. Let's just leave it at that.

Anyways, great poem (as always!).

Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Some love story last. Great poem.

Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I love the way you word things.

It seems like you have a unique way of writing poems, which is a good thing.