|Reviews for Dry Wine Drawings|
| pigeon feet chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
"Once upon a time a little girl
Played with poetry and fell into
A gray casket that played piano
Song as the Raven continued
To sing death into her veins but
She loved this loveless way to live
Until a kiss breathed unwanted life
Into her lungs so she could die again
Love stories always perish first"
That entire end is ravishing. Good work!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Great last line.
Sorry it's taken me forever to review your things. This weeks has been...busy. Let's just leave it at that.
Anyways, great poem (as always!).
| SirScott chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Some love story last. Great poem.
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I love the way you word things.
It seems like you have a unique way of writing poems, which is a good thing.