Well, sorry it took a little longer to review this one. Had some stupid stuff going on at home. Anyways, love poems are always good, though there are lots of them. Most of them remain unique simply because everyones perception of love differs slightly.

Anyways, I liked the constant theme kept by it, and the bit of irony thrown into the end. Irony and poems always mix wonderfully.

Anywho, as you have another poem up, I see, I should go read that one. Catch ya' later!

Wow this is beautiful.. Maybe the thought or idea isn't original but the style is nice, especially with the simplicity of the wordings used, which somehow gives it a depth and meaning that tells the light tragedy of the story so beautifully. Keep up the good work! :)