Reviews for pretend
amelodyofspring chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
hey great work, really enjoyed it... keep up the good work.

totally emo srz

**born from heaven

burns in hell
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
This is pretty good, I like the style with the parentheses. You included some poignant images; my favourite was

'the lies drip from his lips

like dewdrops on wet grass'

I'd like to see more of that.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
This is very good and very true. Great work!

Kristie Marie
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
"because ignorance is bliss

and bliss is what she seeks"

-That is true for so many poeple, sadly. I liked this part a lot. It was my favorite part of the poem, definitely.
sathepine chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
I like the style, the parentheses and the flow of words. Good work :)
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
I know how you feel. Or at least how this girl feels. Wonderful poem, great job.