Reviews for The Dark Prince Returned
xKarix chapter 10 . 3/3/2011
I'm crying because of how long it has been. Nah joking. Thank you for the update.
daydrmr chapter 9 . 4/28/2010
i know it's been a while since you last updated this story, but i would be interested in reading the rest it. -what about their cousin (chaos) does his powers come back fully restored? would the leads ever have human children? does the king die a natural death, or is he murdered? does celeste remember her "children"? - Will you ever finish this story?
ThePureAndSimpleTruth chapter 9 . 11/3/2009
Ha! I loved that..."My eyes are indeed Magenta at this very moment." :D Perfecto. Waiting for more. :D
cat chapter 9 . 9/14/2009
that was awsome
Cecilyatheart chapter 9 . 7/25/2009
I love the last line. I kinda sighed, kinda chuckled.

It's aggravating to see Celina so clueless when I know how tough, smart, and amazing she was in her old life. I know I need to be patient because these things take time, but HURRY IT UP! OOPS! I mean 'please, can't she be the B.A. I know she is already?' Great job as always.
taylor057 chapter 9 . 7/25/2009
im liking your story. cant wait for more
SnowsxBitterxHeart chapter 8 . 4/2/2009
I like this story a lot. I really don't have much to say or time. But keep writing and I'll try to review/read as each chapter comes out. So update as soon as you can.

Great work,

xKarix chapter 7 . 8/3/2008
Please continue writing, I love this story.
sara chapter 5 . 5/15/2008
your writing and sentence structure is apalling. Take this story back to the drawing board and REVISE AND REWRITE
atreyu love chapter 6 . 5/14/2008
i really like the story :)

i wonder what will happen with the god of

chaos and deaths' "girl" lol XD
Cecilyatheart chapter 6 . 5/13/2008
I loved the part about Dave remembering his nieces and nephews. So touching. I really, really like Chester. I'm interested to hear more about the protagonist and look forward to his interactions with the characters. Do we see Chester's mom? I can't wait for more chemistry-those two have it in spades!
Katherine-the-greate chapter 4 . 5/3/2008
that's sad about the fire. The reading part and french parts are great. nice work again
Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
another fun chapter. I like the paint war part. the whole talk with the mind conversation was a bit lengethy and redundent at times.
Cecilyatheart chapter 4 . 5/1/2008
I like the beginning with the flashback of how they met. I had been curious. I think you mentioned an uncle or something in the last chapter that messed things up. Will we see that 'bad' person again? Can't wait to read more.
atreyu love chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
sounds interesting :)
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