I'm crying because of how long it has been. Nah joking. Thank you for the update.

i know it's been a while since you last updated this story, but i would be interested in reading the rest it. -what about their cousin (chaos) does his powers come back fully restored? would the leads ever have human children? does the king die a natural death, or is he murdered? does celeste remember her "children"? - Will you ever finish this story?

Ha! I loved that..."My eyes are indeed Magenta at this very moment." :D Perfecto. Waiting for more. :D

that was awsome

I love the last line. I kinda sighed, kinda chuckled.

It's aggravating to see Celina so clueless when I know how tough, smart, and amazing she was in her old life. I know I need to be patient because these things take time, but HURRY IT UP! OOPS! I mean 'please, can't she be the B.A. I know she is already?' Great job as always.

im liking your story. cant wait for more

I like this story a lot. I really don't have much to say or time. But keep writing and I'll try to review/read as each chapter comes out. So update as soon as you can.

Great work,

Snow

Please continue writing, I love this story.

your writing and sentence structure is apalling. Take this story back to the drawing board and REVISE AND REWRITE

i really like the story :)

i wonder what will happen with the god of

chaos and deaths' "girl" lol XD

I loved the part about Dave remembering his nieces and nephews. So touching. I really, really like Chester. I'm interested to hear more about the protagonist and look forward to his interactions with the characters. Do we see Chester's mom? I can't wait for more chemistry-those two have it in spades!

that's sad about the fire. The reading part and french parts are great. nice work again

another fun chapter. I like the paint war part. the whole talk with the mind conversation was a bit lengethy and redundent at times.

I like the beginning with the flashback of how they met. I had been curious. I think you mentioned an uncle or something in the last chapter that messed things up. Will we see that 'bad' person again? Can't wait to read more.

sounds interesting :)