Reviews for Immutable Termination
Nemonus chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
"So I can clean off all the clutter crowding out my conscience shelf." is excellent. Otherwise, pretty good, with some good vocab and a clear, understandable, modern message. Nice rhyme organization.
searchlight chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
One of my favorites! And I really like that song too, it reminds me of Jonah and...some girl who may or may not write poetry under the name of Searchlight. Heh. "I receive His grace so I can survive." Thank you for capturing that sense, it IS a matter of survival. In the afterlife and even in this world. Like that other song-'...I can't live a day without you...'