Great start. Perhaps you can continue? Anyway, the action was great. I was cheering for Flensky the whole time!

Great set-up. Can't wait to read more

Like it so far...good set-up and some nice imagery.

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Thanks for the review on my story. Yea the detective is a bit cliche, but I just love those loose cannon characters who break all the rules. The gun flashing part was just another way to show how outside the mainstream he really is...and no it's not legal in the least.