Reviews for Marbles and Blue Jeans
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I absolotely love the third stanza. Nice job.

Rowan.
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
You know, before I read this poem, I thought Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants was really really good. Nopes, not anymore, your pants-story is WAY better. I love this poem, and the use of little (the one comma in the last line)punctuation is perfect. And being a teenager myself, I felt like I could relate to bits of the poem. Very good work!

Gemma
SirScott chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
I liked this the touch about rolling your ideas into marbles. That was a great touch.

SirScott
killer syntax chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
I agree, I really enjoyed the first stanza. Outstanding poem, loved the concept and meatphor. Nice work!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Wow...

That first stanza is... Just amazing, as overused a word as that is. Wonderful metaphor. Great job!